Previously, we noted that money played an important and effective role in a community, as well as values, education, family, etc. But today, we see it in a different way, because money has been becoming a conflictive and negative factor regarded as the biggest issue in the society.
"With money I have the world in my hands", that’s one of the worst ideas in most people around the world. This issue, much of the times twist the objective in peoples life’s, like for example, people focus and concentrate in get lots of money, no matter how they get it, just to have more material things than others, like luxury cars and properties. In other words, they are only interested in material things leaving behind the aspects that really means such as values, knowledge, family love, and more.
The priority of people for seeking the richness makes them greedy and miserliness, breaking their relationship with their families and friends, because they mostly concerned about themselves and what they have. Here, the consequences are (in most of the cases) internal or external conflicts or divisions that could affect many people.
Finally, is important to understand that if we don’t know how to manage the money, we are affecting unconsciously not only people that surround us but also our self’s, being ambitious and shallows since we get more and more winnings.
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